Forever darkness Deck (Need Advice)

Alright so i built most of the deck and this is want im thinking, tell mehh if youu think this will run well.

Monsters: 20
2x Dark Creator
1x Dark armed dragon
1x Darklord Zerato
1x Jinzo
1x Dark Freed
1x Dark Parshath
3x armageddon knights
1x Dark grepher
1x Sangan
1x Dark tomato
2x Breaker
1x Gale
1x Doomsday Horror
1x Necro gardna
1x Phantom of Chaos
1x Snipe Hunter



Traps: 10
2x Dark Bribe
1x Mirror Force
1x Solemn
1x Torrential
1x Windespread ruin
2x Sakuretsu
1xBottom Less trap hole
1x Complusary




Magic: 10
1x Trunade
1x heavy Storm
2x Allure of darkness
1x Brain control
1x Lightning vortex
1x different demention Capsule
1x Smashing ground
1x fissure
1x Monster reincarnation





Ive ran it with proxyy and it seems good but idkk, need from morepoint of views. Plz give mehh sum feedback and tips on what i should do.


thankyouu!